Mr-Sun's Reviews

[Mr Sun]

Disgrace of the name Mr Sun

What were you thinking when you made this flash? How could you do something like this? First of all, pictures were irrelevant to the theme of Mr Sun. Secondly, the sun is Yellow, why is it white? Third, the music has nothing to do with anything, just this homo random anime thing. 4) There is no preloader 5) Its just a loop, nothing good 6) I dont care about your deviant art thing 7) How did this get accepted? 8) Remove this from the website 9) It sucks 10) you suck

[Dawn of the Jeb]

Nicely done

I think this submission is very well done. The humor wasn't exactly laugh out loud material (for me), but still 'twas quite amusing. You could try making better graphics for some parts though.

"Holy Poop!" My favorite line. :-)

Battosai810 responds:

any parts in particular? i'm happy to take suggestions
glad you liked it!

[Starwars Lightsaber Battl]

Pretty Good

It was pretty good but here are some suggestions...
1) Add a preloader
2) Make it longer
3) Some parts were much slower than they should be in real life

[XENO TACTIC]

Unoriginal

this is an exact copy of the game Desktop Tower Defense, found on Kongregate, but with scifi graphics, less guns, and more lag. Shame on you

[Effects tutorial]

It was Ok

It's a pretty good tutorial and helped a lot, but could use a lot of changes. There are only 3 special effects that we can learn, you need to make more.

[Kill Bob 2]

Interesting...

It wasn't that bad, but could use some work. You could maybe add more choices for Bob's death and you should work on some of the drawings... the explosion from that tank wasn't very realistic